Smart Driving Academy — Advanced Driving Series
Commentary
Driving

How narrating what you see transforms your observation, anticipation and hazard recognition — and makes you a safer, more aware driver.

From Roadcraft: "A useful technique to help develop your anticipation is to do a running commentary in your head as you drive. Describe what hazards you can observe and how you plan to deal with them."

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Sharpen Observation

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Build Anticipation

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Spot Hazards Earlier

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Improve Planning

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Feeds into IPSGA

Chapter 4 — Roadcraft 2025

What is Commentary Driving?

Commentary driving means narrating aloud — or in your head — everything you observe on the road and what you intend to do about it as you drive. It is not just describing what you see. It includes identifying hazards, questioning what might happen, and stating your planned response.

Roadcraft describes it as "a useful technique to help develop your anticipation." It forces your brain to consciously process information that experienced drivers sometimes handle automatically — but without always noticing gaps in their own awareness.

It is used in police driver training as a diagnostic and development tool. An observer listening to your commentary can immediately identify where your observation is weak, where you missed a hazard, or where your planning was late.

It works for all drivers at all levels — from newly qualified to advanced. The act of putting your observations into words makes the invisible visible.

1

See it

Actively scan the environment — far distance, middle distance, foreground, sides and mirrors. Name what you observe out loud or in your head.

2

Identify it

Classify what you see as a hazard — actual or potential. Ask: is this a physical feature, another road user, or a weather/surface condition?

3

Question it

"What if…?" — verbalise the worst credible outcome. What could this hazard do? What are other road users likely to do next?

4

Plan it

State your intended response. "I'm checking mirrors… I'll reduce speed… I'll hold this position until I can see into the junction." Describe your IPSGA phases.

Chapter 4 — The Science Behind It

How Your Brain Processes Driving Information

INPUT

Vision is your most important sense but use all of them — sight, hearing, smell and physical sensations. Your brain combines your observations with past experience to build a detailed mental map of your situation.

DECISION

Your brain compares this mental picture with past experience, identifies what worked before, and chooses a plan of action. It assesses risk, anticipates how events will unfold, and judges space, position, speed and gear.

OUTPUT

You take action — an appropriate physical response. Steer, brake, signal, accelerate, change position.

FEEDBACK

As you act, your brain takes in new information and continuously checks it so you can modify your actions at any time. This loop never stops while you are driving.

Commentary driving works because it plugs directly into this loop. By verbalising each step, you force the Input and Decision stages to be conscious and deliberate — instead of automatic and unchecked.

When information processing breaks down:

Increased reaction time — you see it but respond too slowly

Errors of perception — you look at a hazard but don't register it

Decreased focus — attention narrows, peripheral hazards are missed

Memory failures — information does not pass into long-term memory

Commentary driving directly counters all four of these by slowing down the Input and Decision stages and forcing conscious, deliberate processing.

Chapter 4 — Roadcraft 2025

What is a Hazard? Knowing What to Look For

"A hazard is anything that is an actual or potential danger." — Roadcraft Chapter 4. A hazard may be immediately obvious, or something less obvious but equally dangerous. Failing to recognise hazardous situations is a major cause of collisions.

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Physical Features

Junctions, bends, road surface, gradients, narrowing, hump bridges, blind crests, road markings, level crossings. Fixed and predictable — but only if you look far enough ahead.

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Position or Movement of Other Road Users

Drivers, cyclists, pedestrians, horses, motorcyclists. Dynamic and unpredictable — observation of their behaviour, head movements, speed and position gives vital early clues.

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Weather and Road Conditions

Ice, standing water, fog, bright sun, debris, loose gravel, mud, wet leaves. These affect grip, visibility and stopping distances — and can change the severity of all other hazards.

Immediate vs. Potential Hazards

"A hazard may be immediate and obvious, such as a car approaching you on the wrong side of the road. Or it might be something less obvious but just as dangerous — for example, a blind bend could conceal an obstacle in your path."

Hazards Come in Clusters

Driving hazards come singly and in clusters — they overlap and change all the time. Your commentary must deal with multiple hazards simultaneously, prioritising by level of danger, proximity, and whether they are moving or stationary.

What commentary does for hazard recognition

Naming a hazard out loud forces you to consciously acknowledge it. You cannot commentate on a hazard you haven't noticed — which makes gaps in your observation instantly apparent to both you and any observer.

Chapter 4 — The Foundation of Commentary

Observation — How to Really See the Road

Scanning — Build the Whole Picture

"Drivers who rapidly scan the whole environment looking for different kinds of hazards have a much lower risk of incident than drivers who concentrate on one area."

"Learn to use your eyes in a scanning motion that sweeps the whole environment — the far distance, the middle distance, the foreground, the sides and rear."

🔭Far distance
👀Middle
⬇️Foreground
◀️Nearside
▶️Offside
🪞Mirrors

Use All Your Senses

  • Hearing — horn sounds, sirens, children playing, unseen vehicles
  • Smell — diesel spill, new-mown grass (slow-moving machinery ahead), smoke
  • Feel — vibration from road surface irregularities, vehicle behaviour changes

Looking but Not Seeing

"What we see largely depends on what we expect to see." Cyclists and motorcyclists become 'invisible' because drivers build expectations on what they commonly see — larger vehicles. On familiar routes, habit can prevent you from spotting unexpected hazards.

Commentary driving directly tackles this — naming what you see forces active rather than passive looking.

Peripheral Vision

The eye's peripheral receptors are especially good at sensing movement. Peripheral vision gives you your sense of speed, road position, and acts as a cue for central vision — warning of areas to examine more closely.

Speed and Observation

"The faster you go, the further ahead you need to look." As speed increases, foreground detail blurs — you must scan further ahead to give yourself time to assess, plan and react. Commentary disciplines you to look further ahead consistently.

Chapter 4 — The Core Skill

Anticipation — Reading the Road Ahead

"Anticipation is the ability to identify hazards at the earliest possible opportunity." — Roadcraft, Chapter 4

Good anticipation is more than good observation. It means reading the road and extracting the fullest meaning from your observations. Observation and anticipation reinforce each other — the more you observe, the better you anticipate; the better you anticipate, the more purposefully you search for clues.

Trained drivers spot the early signs of possible trouble and anticipate what might happen, so they react early and appropriately. They are constantly monitoring risks at a subconscious level. Commentary driving accelerates this by making the process conscious and deliberate.

"Anticipating hazards gives you extra time. The more time you have to react to a hazard, the more likely it is that you can deal with it safely."

"Observation and anticipation reinforce each other... Anticipating hazards means that you search the road for visual clues. From this careful observation, you gather new visual clues that increase your ability to anticipate."— Roadcraft, Chapter 4

"What if…?" — The Commentary Driver's Core Question

Roadcraft specifically recommends asking "What if…?" when you observe a hazard. Here are the direct examples from the book:

"What if that driver waiting at the junction pulled out without looking?"
"What if there's a parked vehicle just round this bend?"

Add your own as you practise:

"What if that child on the footpath steps out between the parked cars?"
"What if the lorry ahead brakes hard for the lights I can't yet see?"
Result: "With practice you should find that you observe more hazards, earlier and in more detail, and gain more time to react." — Roadcraft

Chapter 4 — Turning Observation into Action

The Three Stages of Planning

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Anticipate Hazards

"Generally, things don't just happen; there's usually enough time to anticipate how a hazard might unfold. Good planning depends on early observation and early anticipation of risk."

  • Search the road for visual clues
  • Read behaviour of other road users — head, hand and eye movements
  • Ask "What if…?" at every potential hazard
  • Look beyond the immediate hazard to what lies further ahead
  • Use observation links to anticipate what you cannot yet see
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Prioritise

"Where there are multiple hazards, deal with them in order of importance." The level of danger varies with the hazard itself, its distance, whether it is moving or stationary, and how fast you are approaching it.

  • Grade hazards by level of danger
  • Nearest and moving = highest priority
  • Re-adjust priorities continuously as the situation develops
  • Plan through a series of hazards — treat clusters as one complex hazard
  • Be ready to re-apply IPSGA if priorities change
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Decide What to Do

"The purpose of your plan is to decide on and adopt a course of action that ensures the safety of yourself and other road users at all times."

  • What can you see?
  • What can you not see?
  • What might reasonably happen?
  • Which hazards represent the greatest risk?
  • What is your contingency if things go differently?
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The purpose of the plan is to put you: in the correct position · at the correct speed · in the correct gear · at the correct time — to negotiate every hazard safely and efficiently.

Chapter 5 — Roadcraft 2025

Observation Links — Clues in the Environment

"Observation links are clues to physical features and the likely behaviour of other road users." Aim to build up your own stock of observation links, which will help you anticipate road and traffic conditions as you scan the environment. Commentary driving is the fastest way to build this skill.

Chapter 4 — What Commentary Corrects

Perception Errors Commentary Driving Fixes

🎯 Errors of Judgement

Misjudging hazard severity

"Less experienced drivers often perceive a bend as being less sharp than it actually is so they negotiate it too quickly and risk loss of control or a collision."

Name the hazard and its severity in your commentary — "sharp left bend, reduced view, reducing speed now"
🔍 Errors of Perception

Looking but not seeing

"Drivers using a radio make perceptual errors such as looking directly at hazards but not seeing them because their attention is directed elsewhere." Distraction makes hazards invisible.

Commentary requires you to actively process what you see — passive looking is eliminated
🔄 Habit & Expectancy

Familiar road complacency

"When you drive regularly on familiar roads, habit can prevent you from spotting a hazard that you don't expect." Collisions are disproportionately frequent on familiar roads.

Treat every journey as new — commentary prevents autopilot by demanding active description
👻 Expectancy Bias

Missing vulnerable road users

"Drivers build their expectations on what they commonly see." Cyclists and motorcyclists are underrepresented in mental models — so they become 'invisible' until dangerously close.

Explicitly include cyclists, pedestrians and motorcyclists in every commentary scan
🌀 Attention Tunnelling

Fixating on one hazard

"If you concentrate your vision on a small area, you are less aware of the whole picture." Fixing on one risk area stops you seeing it in context of the wider road environment.

Structured scanning in your commentary — far, mid, near, sides, mirrors — prevents fixation
Slow Reaction

Late hazard recognition

When processing capacity is overstretched, reaction time increases — decision time is longer than response time. The gap between seeing and acting grows.

Commentary keeps the Input→Decision loop active — reducing decision time and overall reaction time

How to Build the Skill

How to Practise Commentary Driving

1

Start with a familiar, quiet route

Choose a road you know well so the driving task is easy. This frees mental capacity to focus on verbalising your observations without managing complex traffic at the same time.

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Narrate aloud — don't just think it

Speaking out loud is more powerful than thinking. It is harder to gloss over a gap when you have to say the words. "Junction ahead… checking mirrors… what can I see to the right?" Record yourself on your phone if alone.

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Always include: see it, name it, "what if?", plan it

Follow the four-step structure on every hazard: observe, identify the type, ask what could happen, state your response. Miss any step and you have found a gap to work on.

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Practise with an observer

An experienced passenger listening to your commentary can immediately spot hazards you missed, moments where your planning was late, or phases of the IPSGA system that were absent. This is exactly how police driver training uses it.

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Review and be honest

"Your ability to honestly self-assess your own driving performance accurately and learn from experience is the most important skill of all." — Roadcraft, Ch. 1. After each practice session, ask: what did I miss? What was late?

Progression levels:

Level 1 — Beginner

Name what you see: "parked van on left, junction ahead, bus stop right." Focus on scanning the full environment — far, mid, near, sides, mirrors.

Level 2 — Developing

Add hazard identification and "What if?": "Child near kerb — what if they step out? Holding speed, covering brake, moving slightly right."

Level 3 — Advanced

Integrate full IPSGA: "Roundabout ahead — Information: mirrors done, signal left. Position: left lane. Speed: reducing. Gear: selecting 2nd. Acceleration: gap available, going."

Roadcraft tip: "If you're distracted or preoccupied, consider giving a running commentary to help you to focus on working through the system as you approach each hazard." — Ch. 3

The Connection

How Commentary Feeds the IPSGA System

Commentary driving is not separate from the IPSGA System of Car Control — it is the active, conscious expression of it. Every phase of the system has a commentary component.

When you narrate your approach to a hazard, you are working through Information → Position → Speed → Gear → Acceleration out loud. The commentary reveals whether each phase was considered, timely, and in the correct order.

Roadcraft links both explicitly: "Use the system of car control whenever you drive so that you make decisions methodically and quickly." Commentary is the training tool that builds that habit.

When Roadcraft says to review your IPSGA use — "Do you take, use and give information throughout all phases?" — commentary provides the answer in real time. If you cannot describe it, you are not doing it.

"When you begin using the system, it may help to name each phase out loud as you enter it."— Roadcraft, Chapter 3

Summary Card — Based on Roadcraft 2025

Commentary Driving — Quick Reference

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What it is

  • Narrate hazards you observe and how you plan to deal with them
  • Spoken or in your head
  • Used in police driver training as a diagnostic tool
  • Makes observation conscious, not automatic
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Observation + Anticipation

  • Scan: far → mid → near → sides → mirrors
  • Use all senses — sight, sound, smell, feel
  • Ask "What if…?" at every hazard
  • Build observation links from clues in the road
  • "See it, name it, question it, plan it"
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3 Stages of Planning

  • 1 — Anticipate hazards early
  • 2 — Prioritise by danger and proximity
  • 3 — Decide: what can/can't I see? What might happen? Contingency?
  • Plan through clusters of hazards as one
  • Continuously re-form plans as conditions change
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How to Practise

  • Start on a familiar, quiet route
  • Narrate aloud — harder to skip steps
  • Integrate IPSGA phases into commentary
  • Practise with an observer for feedback
  • Honestly self-assess after every session
  • Progress: name it → question it → plan it
Commentary driving is the fastest way to find the gaps in your observation — and close them.